A Lughnasadh Tale

I have set my self a task to practice writing and I have chosen to start with a short piece for each turn of nature’s wheel. Here is my starter for Lughnasadh, Lammas, the first harvest, though I have to say before you begin, that I make no apologies for the over use of adverbs. I had been listening to Terry Pratchett all afternoon and he uses adverbs liberally and I love his writing, so this is also partly in honour of Mr T Pratchett who continues to inspire and entertain me.

A tale for Lughnasadhcrowprint

“If you stand here for long enough all life passes you by,” he expounded sagely to no one in particular.

The golden barley swayed in the gentle breeze. It’s collective bearded heads nodding in what appeared to be, at least to him, considered agreement.

A large dragonfly hummed past, skimming the heads of the barley.

“Well at least they seem to be doing alright this year,” he said to the world in general. “Its been a hard few years for them, well, for everyone really, my oath it has. I don’t know, Summers are not like they used to be.” He rambled on in the time honoured fashion of old men who lean on fence posts everywhere.

“I remember a time when Summer meant warmth and sunshine, long hazy days, children running in the fields, and the happy sounds of bees buzzing through the crops. These days it seems to be one long winter with a brief break for rain instead of snow!’ If he could have shaken his head ruefully he would have done.

The Barley continued to nod thoughtfully as the sun beat down on the field.

“Mind you,” he continued informationally, “there was a time when the fields where not so big and the weather was just as dodgy as it has been lately. I think they called it the ‘little ice age’, snow drifts up to your arm pits there was. Seems to me the weather patterns are up and down like a doxies bloomers, if you take the long view, not that I know much about doxies you understand,” he said and chuckled.

The barley pointedly said nothing on the subject.

A pair of sky larks rose up out of the field and began to sing incessantly, flitting back and forward, landing on a post or taller plant here and there, then rising up again, renewing the frantic song.

“Whats got their tails in a twist?” he mused.

If it had been possible he would have craned his neck for a better view into the barley, but he settled instead for a guessing game as to who had disturbed the little pair. “Might be a stoat, or could be a weasel, might be one of them cats from the farm yard, wandering about causing trouble.”

The birds seemed to quieten down after a bit and settled back into what ever it is that skylarks are want to do.

“Oh, whatever it was has got bored and left them alone, well that’s my bit of drama done for the day then,” he sniffed disconsolately.

Presently a cat came sauntering out of the barley and stood in front of him. “Ah it was you was it?” he said. The cat looked up, eyed him suspiciously, then sat down to lick its paws and clean its face.

“I hope you haven’t been murdering any of those little fledglings,” he said reproachfully to the preening cat. “I have been watching them grow all season and I have grown fond of them little tikes.”

The cat ignored him and continued to clean assiduously before finally standing up, and with a contemptuous flick of its perfectly groomed tail aimed in his general direction, stalked off.

“Charming!” he thought.

The sun was high in the sky, the shadows almost non-existent, the air was still, leaving the barley almost motionless.

“I am glad of this hat to keep that sun at bay, battered and torn it may be, but there never was a better hat than this, had it for years I have.  And this old jacket too, though the buttons could do with a bit of attention, hanging by a thread one of them. Still keeps out the worst of the weather.” He assessed his apparel with some pride.

“I dare say some would venture as its, a bit the worse for wear, but it does for me working out here in the field.”

The sultry afternoon wore on, the shadows lengthened and he watched as the light began to throw an orange glow into the golden barley.

“You are ready old friend, I know that colour in your beard, you and me John, you and me, we will take that long road together.” There was a wistful note in his words and the barley seemed to whisper in accord, and, as if to echo the sentiment, a crow issued out a long, low throaty call across the field.

“They will sing to you old friend, that they will. There where three men came out of the west, their fortunes for to try……” He sang with a dusty voice. “I love that song, that I do,” he laughed.

“But no song for me though eh John? No song for me.” There was no bitterness in his words “I don’t mind, really I don’t. I love my time here, and like you, I will be back next year, though I would like it if they would sew my button back on, maybe patch up these trousers a bit, them mice have made fair ol’ mess of ’em this year and no mistake.”

“Hurry Daddy, I want to see ol’ Charlie.” The scruffy child ran ahead of her father who was walking through the barley, feeling the heads and smelling them.

“I’m coming; ol’ Charlie’s not going anywhere, is he?” he called and continued his amble through the field. He wanted to taking his time, drink in the atmosphere, the marmalade light, the smell of the barley and the baked earth, all of it made his heart sing.

“Come on” the impatient child urged. Her father laughed, he looked to see where she had gone. He looked in the direction of ol’ Charlie’ and saw the barley moving under the onslaught of the robust and determined six year old.

“Look Dad, there have been mice living in his pockets again, we will have to get Mum to sew them up.” The girl looked up at Charlie for a moment, then turned and threw her arms around her Dad’s legs.

“We will make him again next year wont we Dad?” her face almost pleading.

“Of course,” He confirmed “you can’t have John Barley Corn alone in the field, wouldn’t be right!”

“And we will still burn him when we have cut the fields, just like last year?” she looked so seriously at her father, he did not laugh.

“You know we will, he has to take our messages and gifts with him doesn’t he?” The farmer said “It’s what we have always done on this farm, when you make a bargain you keep it, especially if it’s with the one who keeps you in food and lodgings, it doesn’t do to make Her sad by forgetting your promises. We will make sure his hat and clothes are nicely cleaned and mended for next year, but the rest of him will go on the Lammas fire, and, this year I have decided to write him a song to send him on his way. Now come on lets get back, your Mum will have tea on the table soon and I am starving, race you!”

Ol’ Charlie watched as the pair ran back across the field, “My own song eh? Well there you go, did you hear that John? I will have a song after all.”

A fat pigeon came down and landed on his arm which creaked under the weight. The bird eyed the field, “You can bugger off an’ all” said ol’ Charlie.

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  1. Pam August 9, 2013 at 4:17 pm - Reply

    Aww Cerri… This was so wonderful… You have a wonderful gift for tale telling a truly wonderful story! Has left me with a smile and a hankering to find my own ol’ Charlie

  2. Kathy Zimmerman August 9, 2013 at 4:42 pm - Reply

    Oh Cerri, that was a lovely piece! The imagery was spot on, I could smell it and see it so clearly. I think it would make a lovely children,s story. Of course it would need a little tweaking for that. What a lovely way to explain to a pagan child the reason for Lugh.

  3. Claire Pattison Valente August 10, 2013 at 12:53 pm - Reply

    Aw, that was lovely that was!

  4. Lesley August 10, 2013 at 2:19 pm - Reply

    Really enjoyed this tale, thank you for sharing. Loved the twist with the scarecrow 🙂

  5. Rhiamon August 10, 2013 at 5:57 pm - Reply

    Fantastic…I would love to share as part of our next Lughnasadh festival if that is ok?

    • Cerri August 10, 2013 at 6:13 pm - Reply

      wow thank you I would be honoured to have your share it :o)

  6. Terrell August 10, 2013 at 6:02 pm - Reply

    You would do Sir Terry proud. That sounded a lot like his writing voice!

  7. Danelle Callahan August 10, 2013 at 7:20 pm - Reply

    Very lovely! Truly captures so many parts of Lammas! Very well done!!

  8. Julia Weaver August 10, 2013 at 7:23 pm - Reply

    That was such a lovely tale! You are such a talented woman and I look forward to seeing more of your writing

  9. Elowen August 10, 2013 at 9:53 pm - Reply

    Really enjoyed your little tale. Can’t wait for the next one.

  10. Katie August 10, 2013 at 11:17 pm - Reply

    That was so sweet! My fav character in the Wizard of Oz was always the scarecrow…they don’t get enough credit! And there you’ve wrote a lovely story about one 😀

  11. Marc August 11, 2013 at 9:51 am - Reply

    So wonderful. No over use of adverbs though. (Maybe that’s because I’m a TP reader, too?)

  12. Alan Berkshire August 11, 2013 at 10:39 am - Reply


    A lovely tale, very evocative. Damh’s song’s inspire me to paint, now I have another source. May I download the story and, with your permission, try and illustrate it? Maybe even create a book from further stories? Beautiful writing. Don’t stop writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Cerri August 11, 2013 at 11:28 am - Reply

      Thank you for such lovely comments, please do download it and let the Awen flow on any imagery, I would love to see the results 🙂 I am contemplating of putting a little illustrated book of “wheel of the year tales” for children together myself as a project, so maybe I will see how that goes before I say yes on that idea to anyone else 🙂
      brightest of blessings Cerri

  13. Alan Berkshire August 11, 2013 at 12:15 pm - Reply

    My thanks! Of course I’ll let you view the results. I just hope I will be able to do it justice. Bright Blessings!

    • Cerri August 11, 2013 at 1:51 pm - Reply

      I look forward to seeing it 🙂

  14. Christine Hasan August 13, 2013 at 4:25 pm - Reply

    It put a smile on my day.

    A delightful piece of work!

    Thank you.

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